Hi - I like your interpretation and use of colors. A few ideas:
1 - Can we shift text a bit closer to circle? 2 - Possible to outline the circle in a thin black line? 3 - How about small center lines on either side of slogan to frame it up with name above?
Wonder what it would look like with name and slogan to the right of illustration, like raspy designs? Or, possible to incorporate name and slogan around the illustration in some way? Just ideas, really appreciate your efforts.
bordo - Any way to outline the lettering with black (thin) outline? Curious to see how your work would come through in a more "illustrated" or "cartoonish" appearance.
No rush here and appreciate your time. If you get any more concept ideas, excited to see what you come up with. Thanks again for your creativity and time.