Hi, we like the way you have designed the simple clock face. We think you are on the right line but that the logo needs to be developed further. We prefer that larger, bolder font as it needs to stand out and be bold, but think that the clock could work better with the text somehow.
We also like the was entry #8 has the minit marketing text almost running into the clock face. Can you develop this idea further and maybe also make the MEB font much bolder?