Matilda's Mobile Kiddie ParkLogo Design Contest

any suggestion?

rgd. mbahdjoyo

revision
font alternative for "mobile Kiddie Park" more easy to read and dynamic.

new concept.

alternative layout and color....
feedback please....


rgd, mbahdjoyo.

alternative entry...
more simple

you can check my entry revision #98

color and roller coaster revision.
any other suggestion?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

It would be interesting to see a version without people in the roller coaster and colors more similar to what’s in the word document.

any other suggestion to make this entry better?

Thanks for the revision. Yes, this is in the right direction.

What do you thing about my new entry #47 ?

thanks for your feedback dmeador,
here some revision that your ask.
am I in right direction?

best rgd, mbahdjoyo

Thank you for your entry! I really like the first draft and the unique style of the rides. It's visually appealing. I would like to see a version without people (an additional ride in the kids place) and colors more in line with what is in the word document.

Hi dmeador,
any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.

best rgd, mbahdjoyo