Matilda's Mobile Kiddie ParkLogo Design Contest

sorry it is on selection mode, only 1st can update entry

thanks

I like that you have provided a version with a unique and interesting font. I like how the words “Mobile kiddie park” are larger and easier to read. I also like that you have tried a new blue but it’s a little bit too much towards purple.

Thanks for the updated entry! I like seeing the different colors but it's a bit more brown than what I'm interested in. It would be great to see a blue like in the popsicles in this picture: https://fineartamerica.com/featured/bomb-pop-pattern-kelly-gilleran.html

I also like the vintage look of the popsicle picture, if that can be incorporated somehow: https://fineartamerica.com/featured/bomb-pop-pattern-kelly-gilleran.html

I like the banner in entry #10 the most for where the word "Matilda's" is shown.

Lastly, it would be great to see a whimsical font used like the Pete's Dragon picture.

thanks again for feedback.

Thank you for the updated submissions. I think that this one is still my favorite of your submissions. I think it does a good job of convaying what the business is and does. It would be interesting to see with more vintage colors like in the pictures in the word document.

Thank you for the updated drafts. I like where it’s going! It would be great to see a version with the first tent above the car and also the Ferris wheel but bigger ( and like the one in the word document - Eli bridge) giving depth to the image. And also one without the blue cars since the bigger Ferris wheel might be in the way. Thanks!

thanks for rank. I have update my entry.

thanks

After looking at this some more, I've moved it up in the ranking. Looking forward to seeing another draft!

Thanks for the updated versions! It would be great to see something that somehow incorporates the original car into the design (maybe in the bottom) with this new version that emphasizes the ferris wheel. It would also be great to see some fonts inline with the examples in the document. Thanks!

hi thanks for feedback,
here is with new concept

I like this version better of the two you have created. I like the colors used, the ribbon across the middle and the red car. I would like the see a version with less emphasis on the car, kid's carnival rides above the words in place of the blue cars and font more in line with the font examples in the word document.