We like #21 and how you incorporated the MRA. Could you take the cap out, I think it makes it a little too cartoonish? Also, rather than have the right side of the M go straight across, can you extend it down like a regular M? We like #22 also, but I think we'd rather see a globe that has a few less lines horizontally and vertically.
I like how you are using the MRA - but maybe it's the globe throwing me off. The globe sort of looks like a golf ball now. Maybe it's just too small to try to incorporate the globe. Can you try to focus on the MRA portion of it?
I'm going to ask you to think outside of the box a little on #73. We like it but we really want it to be even more powerful, creative and cool. I think we're starting to lean a little towards the wordmark. Again, be creative.
We like the style of the pillar in #134 it's less cartoonish and more symbolic of strength. The only thing is the shading on the left, it takes away from the column. Is there any way you can design a pillar similar to the one in #134 without all the shading, and make it a little bigger?
Thanks for making the column bigger in #156. We don't want the globe, but the column is sort of on the right track because it has has a masculine, strong quality to it.
We like #173 the best . . . we're still a little hesitant on the amount of shading on the left hand side of the pillar. Maybe you could add another white vertical line in the pillar so there are 4 rather than 3 . . . not sure if that would help, but can you give it a try?
Thank you! It looks good. Can we also see that column in full length - with a base on it too? It might be off proportionally to the lettering on the right but if we need to, we can add the tag "training the next generation of leaders" back in or try to make it work somehow.
We all definitely like your pillar - it's what we're looking for. There's a couple of designs that we'd like to see:
1.) We'd like to see the pillar with a base on the bottom and have the words centered to the right. 2.) We'd like to see the pillar the way it is now without the swoosh underneath it, and move the pillar closer to our name.
Please ignore my last two comments . . . I think we've narrowed it down to what we're looking for. Could we please see #177 without the swoosh and perhaps a slight angle on the bottom instead? Also could you move the pillar closer to our name and change the font to Perpetua Titling or to Felix Titling? We really love your pillar because it has dimension and is most similar to what we are looking for.
Can you change the font to perpetua titling - the space between the R and the S in Masters looks off and I think it's because we used the felix titling font. Also, can you darken the word "Masters" up a bit,so it pops a little more and remove the line between Masters and Regional Academy?
In #255 could you lighten up the just the Regional Academy font a little? Also could you make the "M" in Masters a tiny bit larger than the rest of the letters in the word?