Here is my logo idea for your pizzeria: a custom baseball-style script, with Sox colors. The word "Massachusetts" can be dropped if you need to recreate the logo at smaller sizes (for caps, embroidery, etc.)
Entry #41 - Three things. . . . Could i see it in B&W? Could the colors be reversed? (Red and Green) Could you move the "pizzeria" out of the name "Mike's" and see what it looks like lower and to the right. So that the line kind of wraps it.
And I believe this is what you meant for the 3rd version. If you were envisioning it placed in a different way, just let me know and I will submit some other revisions as well. Thanks!