Thank you for your submission. I find this to be very creative and different from any of the eye-themed logos I have seen in the past. I wonder if it would be possible to incorporate the sail pattern from the original logo, maybe into the top part of the eye instead of the lashes? Also I wonder how it would look if "Vision Care" were larger and/or darker so it could be seen from a distance.
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Thank you for the feedback.
I will make the changes and upload the new concepts as soon as possible.