I like the idea of the puzzle, but I would prefer it to be more subtle. I like the way you've emphasized marriage counselor, yet included Austin. I also like the change to italics and change of color. On a scale from 1-10 I give the font a 7. I like that it's lively, especially Austin, but I'm not so crazy about that r. I don't like the colors, definitely not gray.
thanks for feedback - here more subtle colors and different font - hope this works better for you. happy to work to get a better look if you like the puzzle concept. I feel our 'heart' is often like a puzzle where you have to figure out how the pieces fit together to make it just right!