margo bat mitzvahLogo Design Contest

I really like the circle design here. The font seems a bit like 50's bowling alley though. Can I see it with the words stacked on top of each other with a more modern bold font

Thanks for the feedback, here is another font option...

(This comment references Entry #26)

Thanks so much for working on it. It is just what we were looking for. I am an event planner and I am going to pass it on to my client and get back to you with any other comments

Thanks, looking forward to more feedback!

I like this font better, but it is still feeling retro. Can you take a look at the update on the brief and see the invitation for this party that i uploaded. This is the feeling we are looking for. I like your style so I am hoping you can work on it. Also, we need to change the words to eat, dance, chill.
I am wondering if we stack the words, but curn (kern) them so they are all the same length. Then do the circles in a more modern way. Some filled in, some hollow ???????

http://www.filesavr.com/XQVE98HUSXAEGNI
please take a look at this file to see the invitation for this party and the direction this logo should take

Thanks for the feedback, here is the revised design...

(This comment references Entry #37)

Great revision, can you try the MBG 12.18.10 under the word chill and kern it also to be the same length as the other words. I would like to see how that looks. In addition, I would like to see it where the middle circle is not so big so that all the words are not inside it

My comments just now were regarding number 40

Thanks for the latest feedback, I am going to be away from my design computer when the contest ends.
So please consult the contest guidelines if you need any more changes from me during judging.
Thanks!

(This comment references Entry #53)

Hi, We are back to liking 41 and 42, We would like the words to be tilted as in 42, but we dont want them kerned anymore. We want the mbg and the date handled as you did in 41. We would like other font options, clean and modern, all lower case.
Can we also see it in black and white and gray in addition to these colors. We will be printing it both ways.
We only have a few hours left, can you do this quickly, thanks

Thanks for the feedback & ranking.
Here is a revised version, I was able to re-create this on my work computer.
I can show font variations once I get back to my design computer (approx. 5pm CDT)
while the contest is in judging mode.
Thanks again

(This comment references Entry #70)

Thanks so much for your work, It was really close in the end, but the client choose the other designer. Hopefully you will enter my next competition, I really like your style.