March BrownLogo Design Contest

I can't be more specific the fly is a cut and paste and is not a design- it is frumpy, too broad, too big- it's not a work of art st any level it's a cut and paste of an image that makes it look like a logo for a sporting goods outfit. I had indicated it either needs to be incredibly detailed or abstract and I included a link to a graphic of a real fly - your fly is a man made fly

I read this in the general feedback area but I was expecting something specific to the design I submitted.

For example, what kind of detail is this design missing?

The dry fly either needs to be far more fine and detailed or more in abstract. Also it's too big- needs to be much smaller. Envoys advsisors should be the font, thiness and color that plamen has on the other logo. Color of logo is better a little more glossy but still needs to be more gradation and a little more orange in it. Finally, see my comments re the merchant mark- the fly or the MB and the 1964 should be in a circle almost like a wax seal from an english merchants mark of old. Not sure if I like the fly or the MB better- leaning toward the MB. Lines either side of "envoys advisors" should be razor thin as should be the "1964" and slightly italicized- should be very subtle.
4 hours ago
patcong
United States
Should be " &" between e.g. "Envoys & Advisors"