#11 - Thank you for your revisions!! :) I still really like the styling of your initial letter M and would like to see that used as the first letter in the word Marais without the M separate from the rest of the word. I also really like your idea of having a separate "piece" however i would like to have some sort of emblem rather than an initial or letter. Logo tournament uses the versace medusa head logo as one of their examples. I think some sort of "hand drawn" simplistic emblem to go with a handwritten font (spelling out marais) like your letter M might look good together. Last, the font needs to feel a little more feminine than what was used in #11. Let me know if these comments don't make sense. :):):)
If you look at general comments i elaborated on the brand a little bit more for everyone. thank you again.