thank you for your entries and for trying something abstract. i elements of both of them: the font layout in #16 and the abstract pattern in #15, but to be honest i don't really see the palm leaf in #15 - sorry! the design in #16 is cool but a little too straight and proper. maybe you could try something that combines the 2? Thank you!
thanks for the feedback. the palm leaf is in design #16 not #15 and is sort of a close up of the leaves ridges. I will take this all on board and keep at it.
69 looks great! i'm going to run it by my partner and we might have some color scheme variations to ask of you - thanks for sending the new idea along! dean
hi - i am looking at some last minute changes and wonder if you can make a couple changes on #69, which is my favorite of your submissions: 1> the logo has a definitely rounded feel on the right side, but the left side does not have the rounded curve feel to it around the edges. without actually adding an edge, can you make the left side feel a bit more rounded (like the right side feels)? it just needs some balance 2> can you make the font a little thicker and more bold? 3> please remove the glare/shine; i'm told that this doesn't print well on cards