Hi Panji
First of all thank you for your entry, it is beautiful. I like your touch on the price tag. The colours are right and I don’t have too much issue on this department. However, I felt that the logo is slightly a little too simple and seems like you can add a little more flavour to it. The only thing I can think of is to expand the line or hoop that is connected to the price tag a little more to make this a little busier. I think you are definitely on the right track!
Thank you for your entry and I look forward to more creative from you!
Sincerely,
Sampson