Hi Jekson
Thank you so much for submitting your entries, I really appreciate it! I think the two entries you submitted reminds me too much of Monopoly. Since people do not read words that they are familiar to, I am afraid the average people will actually think it is a Monopoly logo. I am trying to take the “catchy” part of Monopoly in the name only so people can remember it, but it cannot look too similar. In terms of the font, I think it is a little tall. In terms of colours, I am happy with the palette and I think they are vibrant and bright. But the colour cannot be identical to what Monopoly uses. The effect behind the name is pretty and I like it. I am not really excited with the shopping bags, they are nice and detailed but I maybe better to look more abstract. Looking at your profile I can tell you are extremely talented. I am sure after this communication you will have better direction of what we are looking for. I thank you again for your work and looking forward to more designs from you!
Sincerely,
Sampson