Mallery FinancialLogo Design Contest

thanks for the feedback.

Please check my new design revision, how do you think?

Thank you so much for trying that experiment. Like many good experiments, this one failed. :-/ I prefer this one, the one I liked originally. Those heavy lines are too heavy.

Taglines:
- I'm considering going bolder with the tagline (not boldface -- changing the message!).
- Could I also see three new versions (based on this one, #586) that showcase different tagline language?
1. Make Money Make a Difference
2. Make Your Money Make a Difference
3. Make Money Do Important Things

Thanks!

Hi there, please check my design revision, is it correct?

Sorry, I now see that you're increasing the thickness of the horizontal (left to right) line. I liked that the way it was originally. Please revert those to the original size.

I'd like to see the three vertical lines between Mallery and Financial to be heavier.

How about this one?

Sometimes one doesn't know where the line is between just right and too much until you go past it. Let's be bold and try substantially bigger and see what it looks like.

How about this one?

Could I please see a version with stronger (slightly thicker) vertical lines?

Thank you, i am waiting for further news from you :)

Best regards

Yes, that's what I was looking for. Thank you.

Please check my design revision, how do you think?

This is the one I like best -- the serif font.

Please use the vertical bar arrangement: short, tall, short (as in #398).

Please insert a horizontal line between the company name and the tagline.

Thanks!

I'm still hoping to see a version of this logo -- the SERIF version of this one, which I can't seem to find at the moment -- with a horizontal line separating the top part and the tag line:

Mallery ||| Financial
line
Financial Planning and Investments

Thank you.

Please check my new design revision, how do you think?

Sorry, I must have mis-communicated. In the tagline, there are only two units: "Financial Planning" and "Investments." So no divider between Financial and Planning.

I was hoping to see a horizontal rule between the company name and the tagline.

Sorry for any confusion.

Please check my new designs revision #469, how do you think?

Can we try one with a rule between the company name and the tagline? The trick will be to get the spacing so that it looks simple and clean, not too tight, not too airy.

Please check my new designs revision, how do you think?

I like this, for its elegant simplicity. It's understated, shows confidence. This version contains no tagline. Could you please show me a version(s) that includes the tagline? The trick will be to add it while keeping the simplicity and cleanness of the existing version. I like the tagline to be readable, but I think with the horizontal span of this logo that won't be a problem. Thanks!

Please check my design revision, how do you think?

Please check my new design revision, how do you think?

Please check my design revision, how do you think?