Mallery FinancialLogo Design Contest

sorry about confusion:) please check #730 , #731 Thanks so much!

Thanks. But I wanted to see the typography in #723 -- serif fonts. The one I liked originally was also serif, but the color and overall look of the tagline in #723 was crisper, clearer.

Taglines:
- I'm considering going bolder with the tagline (not boldface -- changing the message!).
- In addition to the changes I requested earlier, could I also see three new versions that showcase different tagline language?
1. Make Money Make a Difference
2. Make Your Money Make a Difference
3. Make Money Do Important Things

Thanks!

Thank you for the update.

I like the treatment of the tagline font in this one (#723). Clearer, crisper. Good.

In the box, you changed the white mountain peaks to start at the bottom. I think I understand the logic, but I prefer the way they are in #338. I think they have more energy starting inside the box.

I'm still thinking about the dot. I might like to see that restored. I'll get back to you about it soon.

Summary
Please show me two versions:
- This typography, but with the original graphic (#338)
- This typography, but with the graphic in #722

Thanks!

PLease check my update. Thanks so much!

One person reacting to this logo thought the white circle/dot was (in some undefined way) "too much." I'm not sure what you can do with that feedback, but it might be a starting point in sharping the image logo and moving up.