#16 looks really good, but the dual snakes/winged staff I was keen to avoid - mis-used in medicine, as it's actually the caduceus, sign of commerce (not the look I really want...).
The snake looks pretty good, more realistic/natural than some of the other options on here - not sure if more detail is possible? The half circle marks at the sides could maybe be a little smaller/finer. Maybe some black in there would be good. I was wondering if an irregular nobly staff, like a branch, might be a possibility?
#38 and #39 both look really good. For preference I'd like some darker colours/black (the logo will be in colour on my cards, but black and white on some printed paperwork). Maybe more blue on the snake and a darker rod?
The semi-circles I am undecided about - maybe a bit too close to the main design?
I do like the design you have done for #53. I wondered if you could try a few different blue shades, or maybe a few borders - like the half circles in some of the other designs. Fairly thin and subtle. Thanks.
Thank's a lot for your continue and responsive feedback.. really appreciated..that's really helped me to understood what you looking for.. I'll pleasure for other revisions when you need, please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
Thank you very much for your hard work on my behalf. I do apologise for not selecting one of your designs - it was very close. I see that you have withdrawn your entries; if you wished to re-enter them I would be very happy to place you in my shortlist so that it shows up on your statistics as a medal. Regards, AM.
Thank you.. glad to joint in your contest.. sorry I should withdrawn my entries, when we feel no more chance so I can use my concept in other contest..:) Thank's for responsive feedback from begining... hopeness you satisfied with the result
Thank you.. glad to joint in your contest.. sorry I should withdrawn my entries, when we feel no more chance so I can use my concept in other contest..:) Thank's for responsive feedback from begining... hopeness you satisfied with the result