DesignLab,
Would you mind working on a few variations that address these issues:
1. Less orange and blue squares inside the orange swash. We are concerned about reproduction.
2. Better integration of the bottom tail of the swash with the bottom of the M and the bottom of the "A."
3. A few options on the swash itself to tighten it and maybe even reduce its size. Depending on what you do with the size, this may require some additional variations with the orange and blue squares.
Please post questions to clarify as needed.
Thanks!