Kent - take a look at my inputs over the last few days. I like what you have but it isn't quite clicking for me. I ahve made numerous suggestions and "wants" and some of those are now showing up in the latest renderings.
OK - your efforts are better with my notes now and I like #42. #58 has the mach meter in it but I wanted that mach meter in the letter "O" in One. I like the red/white/blue contrail you have in #52.