#24 #28 We like the most the entry where the text doesn't cover the dogĀ“s bag (we prefer entry 24) We find it a little to hard to read the L in Lundvad (24), but like your idea! Can you change the text style in 24 into a more "simple" text style? Thank you!
Hi, Can you make the lines in your drawings more thick? We love the way you draw! - but we need the final logo to be more eye chatching - so that it will be our logo people see as the first thing in the magazines ect. Perhaps this is done by a thicker line...? What do you think?
And can you take away the orange line in 44? - and in the next drawing(s) avoid ekstra lines, so that the logo becomes a bit more simple/minimalistic and clear - but still comes from your hand. Hope you understnad what we mean :-)
In 73 we would very much like the one dog to be a border collie and the other to be a labrador (the one on the right hand side already looks like a labrador.
#103 Remove the ball between the two dogs. Its fun with a ball in the logo, but then it needs to be more like the tennis ball you made in entry 105. We like that the tennis ball is a part of the text - otherwise one of the dogs should be holding it in its mouth...
Can you make the dog drawings with a even thicker line? We like the line in entry 105 :)
Can you make the whole text "Lundvad Hundeakademi" thicker and "Hundeakademi" bigger/larger - we like the "Hundeakademi" fond/text style on 104.
#102 We still like the dog and its movement - its called a play bow :) But text and fond-wise we are more into 104. Also we will problaly end up with two dogs in the logo (one of them could very well be a dog in play bow)
#105 We love your thick lines and the tennis ball ! We still prefer dogs in motion.
We like to keep the two dog "breeds" in 120 :-) but can you make some changes to the way they are drawn? #40 has a different type of drawing style compared to 120. Is it possible for you to use the type of drawing in 40 in 120?
And can you show us what the text looks like in black letters only?
Thanks for your 2 new entries! We like the changes! Getting closer and closer to something right for us. In your next drawing, could you try to make the line even a bit more minimalistic and simple - still don't change the dog breeds/dog personality - We are looking for at clear, visible, simple, somehow thick line - a line that doesn't stop over and over again.. Hope you understand what we mean?
Textwise: Can you make our name more eye catching? Perhaps with thicker letters? And "Hundeakademi" a litte larger.
We will try to be as specific as we can: 1. the circle around the dogs in 153 is the one we like 2. a tiny bit longer tail on the border 3. the border's hair on the in 153 - we like to keep 4. the border in 155 is the best - because of the simpler lines 5. the labrador in 153 is a keeper ! 6. can you do something about the borders hind legs in 153 - in direction more simple not chubby :-)