Luminary PropertiesLogo Design Contest

thanks for updating colors and adding slogan - like these but think I am leaning toward the offset one more

Can we try the word "Luminary" in red and the rest of the words in black? and maybe "shinning" in red or at least a different color to stand out?

Thanks for feedback sir,
I create some change, tell me if you need to change somethink more, i really happy to do

Regards,
Ocha

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Thanks, I think I am back to liking the blue and red star and more upright given feedback I am getting from colleagues. Can you make the font, particularly the word Luminary, bolder? also can you make the slogan stand out more?

update

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