we extended the contest because we are still trying to decide. We really like your design but I'm hoping we can try some different fonts with the name Luks, Santaniello Petrillo & Jones. Everything else is perfect but I want to see some samples of other fonts for the name. Thank you for all your hard work.
Change 2 - Please DO NOT change the font for PETRILLO & JONES, we really like the font. But we need the letters to be more close together -
t h e r e i s t o o m u c h s p a c e
in between the letters for Petrillo & Jones. We DO NOT LIKE:
P E T R I L L O & J O N E S
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CHANGE TO:
PETRILLO & JONES
by moving the first name in a little bit to the right and moving the second name in a little bit to the left. We want the P from Petrillo to be under the U from Luks, and we want the S from Jones to be under the second L in Santaniello. We want it to look ALMOST like this:
LUKS, SANTANIELLO
PETRILLO & JONES
we want the third and fourth names to be CENTERED under the first and second names. Can you make this happen for us?
Change 1 - Please delete/remove/take away the comma (,) after Santaniello:
LUKS, SANTANIELLO (---here--- remove the comma --), so we will have only 1 comma in the entire logo and the 1 comma will be after LUKS,
We really like the left side with the letters. We really like the colors, the lines and the slogan: OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY. We need your help with with 2 FINAL CHANGES, and then we can choose you as our $575 USD winner!
OK /this is our first choice and i thank you for all your work. The problem I have is you are right and left justifying Petrillo & Jones. Please do not expand that font. Because they are less letters than Luks, Santaniello, they will naturally be slightly indented. Also please drop the comma after Santaniello. Thank you!
ok I keep coming back to this one. I like the font size I just don't want petrillo and jones spaced out to fit the line and the font to be a bit darker or bolder. Otherwise this one is good.
this is very close and I think it may be the last change. Make the & same color as firm name. Make the firm name a little darker and Petrillo and Jones a little bit smaller than Luks Santaniello. Thank you.
Please will you show us the maroon color for the three lines above and below the letters? And then please will you show us the gold color for the three lines above and below the letters? Thank you.
Please will you make these changes for #478:
1. Please change to silver/grey Petrillo and Jones (but leave as gold: &)
2. Add more gold to the letter S but add only to the very bottom/end part of the S so that the letter S starts as gold at the top and then fades into the silver/grey of the upper part of the loop for the P but then fades back into gold for the bottom stem of the S which is the bottom part of the loop of the P.
Thank you.
Hi. Thank you for the new options. 480 and 482 are improving design. Please show us 482 with silver/grey for Petrillo Jones but leave as gold this: &
Thank you.
Hi. We are frustrated because none of the color combinations are working for us. Please will you show us everything in maroon or burgundy. And, please will you show us a 2nd option with colors you like? Please help us. Thank you.
SECOND REQUEST:
HI again. Please show us #469 with these colors:
Stripes over and under initials - silver
L - burgundy
S - dark gold fading into silver P
P - silver
J - silver
(P&J smaller font than L and S)
LUKS SANTANIELLO PETRILLO & JONES - fading shades from TOP TO BOTTOM OF THE LETTERS fading between gold, silver, and burgundy
TAG LINE - OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY in all burgundy
HI again. Please show us #469 with these colors:
Stripes over and under initials - silver
L - burgundy
S - dark gold fading into silver P
P - silver
J - silver
(P&J smaller font than L and S)
LUKS SANTANIELLO PETRILLO & JONES - fading shades from left to right of the gold, silver, and burgundy
TAG LINE - OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY in all burgundy
Thank you for $470...we are having two problems with #469 -
1st problem: the letters still appear like LPSJ but we need it to appear like LSPJ - can you make the P and J a little smaller?
2nd problem: we are having a difficult time reading the tag line - please will you try two different options - first: please try making all the letters upper case: OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY... second: please try making a little more space in between each word:
OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY.
thank you for all the changes...
Please send 2 new separate options for #468:
1st option: please change "Tell The Story" to maroon;
2nd option: please change "Tell The Story" to maroon AND show the entire logo as glossy.
please change -
1. "Tell The Story" maroon.
2. "Our Verdicts Tell The Story" to a slightly thicker font.
3. Three lines above initials and three lines below initials to glossy.
4. Make the name Luks a slightly darker grey.
5. COMPLICATED: We need to work on the positioning of the 4 initials - we need it to look more like LSPJ and less like LPSJ - we need it to be more obvious that the order of the letters is LSPJ and not LPSJ....Maybe the L and the S need to be made slightly larger? [Definitely the P and the J need to be made at the same size (right now you have the J larger than the P).] It may work if the L and the S are larger (but have the L and the S the same size) and then make the P and the J smaller than the L and the S (but have the P and J the same size).
FIRST REQUEST: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon?
Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Now, it is 7:20 in the morning on Wednesday. We can know what to expect from you with response time if we know your time of day. What time is it for you?
4 requests - 4 easy, 1 complicated:
please change -
1. "Tell The Story" maroon.
2. "Our Verdicts Tell The Story" to a slightly thicker font.
3. Three lines above initials and three lines below initials to glossy.
4. Make the name Luks a slightly darker grey.
5. COMPLICATED: We need to work on the positioning of the 4 initials - we need it to look more like LSPJ and less like LPSJ - we need it to be more obvious that the order of the letters is LSPJ and not LPSJ....Maybe the L and the S need to be made slightly larger? [Definitely the P and the J need to be made at the same size (right now you have the J larger than the P).] It may work if the L and the S are larger (but have the L and the S the same size) and then make the P and the J smaller than the L and the S (but have the P and J the same size).
FIRST REQUEST: Please may we see #463 with "Tell The Story" in maroon?
Second Request: Please may we see #463 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Third Request: FOR #463, please will you make the gray color for the L and for the name "Luks" just a slightly darker gray?
FIRST REQUEST: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon?
Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Third Request: please will you make the gray color for the L and for the name "Luks" just a slightly darker gray?
FIRST REQUEST: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon?
Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Second request: please can we see #409 without 2 changes - please show the tag line without italics and please show the names with the same font but slightly thicker letters?
Fourth request: please show us #409 without italics letters for the tag line and with glossy font for the letters and glossy font for the 3 top and 3 bottom lines.
Third request: please show us #409 without italics for the tag line, and with thicker letters for the names and with the initialsame on the left side in glossy color?
Fourth request: please show us #409 without italics letters for the tag line and with glossy font for the letters and glossy font for the 3 top and 3 bottom lines.
Third request: please show us #409 without italics for the tag line, and with thicker letters for the names and with the initialsame on the left side in glossy color?
Second request: please can we see #409 without 2 changes - please show the tag line without italics and please show the names with the same font but slightly thicker letters?
We have chosen you as our finalist! We have a few requests for some changes. FIRST REQUEST: please can we see #409 without italics letters for the tag line?
Yosaiki, On the column design, can you make the S stand out. For those who don't know our firm, the P can be mistaken for the letter I, and the S can be missed.
please one more change? 1) make luks santaniello in maroon and petrillo and jones in silver. 2) make luks santaniello slightly larger than petrillo and jones 3) make tag line fade from maroon to silver back to maroon. THANK YOU
in the open phase, designer didn't anything just only what has been created, more over copying the concept of other designers, these are rules, so I hope you understand
in the open phase, designer didn't anything just only what has been created, more over copying the concept of other designers, these are rules, so I hope you understand
Second request - please make LUKS and the line a darker grey
-AND- please make the tag line (our verdicts tell the story) a little tiny bit thicker - not too much thicker, but a small amount. Thank you.
we like this - can we see #415 with no changes except:
1. all upper case letter for the tag line: OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY
2. use a smaller font for the tag line - not too small though because we need to be able to read it without wearing glasses - a font a little smaller than the O V T T and S in the tag line of #415 but a little bigger than the lower case letter in the tag line. Please leave everything else in #415 the same. Thank you.
we like this option also. thank you very much. Can we see this option without italics for Our Verdicts Tell The Story - can we see it with the letters straight? thank you.
second request - can we see #393 with these colors:
LUKS - grey
SANTANIELLO - maroon
PETRILLO - gold
& - gold
JONES - gold
OUR VERDICTS - maroon
TELL THE STORY - gold
thank YOU!
we prefer 383. we prefer NOT to have the word VERDICTS in gold but thank you for showing it to us. please show us OUR VERDICTS in maroon and TELL THE STORY in gold
Thank you for your creative submission. We have chosen #277 for our top 5 final choice. We would like to have you change the letter J to maroon and we would like to have the letter S gold but blended - so there is a little maroon from the P blending a little into the S.
tag line font needs to be more prominent so you don't miss the tag line. The P in the column is difficult to see. Maybe if the portion of the S and P that connect was a different color than the P and S
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t h e r e i s t o o m u c h s p a c e
in between the letters for Petrillo & Jones. We DO NOT LIKE:
P E T R I L L O & J O N E S
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CHANGE TO:
PETRILLO & JONES
by moving the first name in a little bit to the right and moving the second name in a little bit to the left. We want the P from Petrillo to be under the U from Luks, and we want the S from Jones to be under the second L in Santaniello. We want it to look ALMOST like this:
LUKS, SANTANIELLO
PETRILLO & JONES
we want the third and fourth names to be CENTERED under the first and second names. Can you make this happen for us?
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LUKS, SANTANIELLO (---here--- remove the comma --), so we will have only 1 comma in the entire logo and the 1 comma will be after LUKS,
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2) indent Petrillo and Jones both sides.
thanks you!!
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1. Please change to silver/grey Petrillo and Jones (but leave as gold: &)
2. Add more gold to the letter S but add only to the very bottom/end part of the S so that the letter S starts as gold at the top and then fades into the silver/grey of the upper part of the loop for the P but then fades back into gold for the bottom stem of the S which is the bottom part of the loop of the P.
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HI again. Please show us #469 with these colors:
Stripes over and under initials - silver
L - burgundy
S - dark gold fading into silver P
P - silver
J - silver
(P&J smaller font than L and S)
LUKS SANTANIELLO PETRILLO & JONES - fading shades from TOP TO BOTTOM OF THE LETTERS fading between gold, silver, and burgundy
TAG LINE - OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY in all burgundy
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Stripes over and under initials - silver
L - burgundy
S - dark gold fading into silver P
P - silver
J - silver
(P&J smaller font than L and S)
LUKS SANTANIELLO PETRILLO & JONES - fading shades from left to right of the gold, silver, and burgundy
TAG LINE - OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY in all burgundy
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1st problem: the letters still appear like LPSJ but we need it to appear like LSPJ - can you make the P and J a little smaller?
2nd problem: we are having a difficult time reading the tag line - please will you try two different options - first: please try making all the letters upper case: OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY... second: please try making a little more space in between each word:
OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY.
Thank you very much.
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2nd option: please change "Tell The Story" to maroon AND show the entire logo as glossy.
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Please send 2 new separate options for #468:
1st option: please change "Tell The Story" to maroon;
2nd option: please change "Tell The Story" to maroon AND show the entire logo as glossy.
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1. "Tell The Story" maroon.
2. "Our Verdicts Tell The Story" to a slightly thicker font.
3. Three lines above initials and three lines below initials to glossy.
4. Make the name Luks a slightly darker grey.
5. COMPLICATED: We need to work on the positioning of the 4 initials - we need it to look more like LSPJ and less like LPSJ - we need it to be more obvious that the order of the letters is LSPJ and not LPSJ....Maybe the L and the S need to be made slightly larger? [Definitely the P and the J need to be made at the same size (right now you have the J larger than the P).] It may work if the L and the S are larger (but have the L and the S the same size) and then make the P and the J smaller than the L and the S (but have the P and J the same size).
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Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
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please change -
1. "Tell The Story" maroon.
2. "Our Verdicts Tell The Story" to a slightly thicker font.
3. Three lines above initials and three lines below initials to glossy.
4. Make the name Luks a slightly darker grey.
5. COMPLICATED: We need to work on the positioning of the 4 initials - we need it to look more like LSPJ and less like LPSJ - we need it to be more obvious that the order of the letters is LSPJ and not LPSJ....Maybe the L and the S need to be made slightly larger? [Definitely the P and the J need to be made at the same size (right now you have the J larger than the P).] It may work if the L and the S are larger (but have the L and the S the same size) and then make the P and the J smaller than the L and the S (but have the P and J the same size).
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Second Request: Please may we see #463 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Third Request: FOR #463, please will you make the gray color for the L and for the name "Luks" just a slightly darker gray?
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Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
Third Request: please will you make the gray color for the L and for the name "Luks" just a slightly darker gray?
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Second Request: Please may we see #460 with "Tell The Story" in maroon and the letter "L" in grey fading into the letter "P" the same way you have the colors letters P and S fading into each other?
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OK, I'll be try out, Thanks
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-AND- please make the tag line (our verdicts tell the story) a little tiny bit thicker - not too much thicker, but a small amount. Thank you.
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OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY, but a slightly smaller font. thank you.
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1. all upper case letter for the tag line: OUR VERDICTS TELL THE STORY
2. use a smaller font for the tag line - not too small though because we need to be able to read it without wearing glasses - a font a little smaller than the O V T T and S in the tag line of #415 but a little bigger than the lower case letter in the tag line. Please leave everything else in #415 the same. Thank you.
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LUKS - grey
SANTANIELLO - maroon
PETRILLO - gold
& - gold
JONES - gold
OUR VERDICTS - maroon
TELL THE STORY - gold
thank YOU!
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