I don't like the red in the B, and the B doesn't feel centered if that makes sense. It might actually be centered but distance from top and bottom and the spacing between each lions hand and the B feel off.
Here's a tricky one for you, remove the fleur de lis, and turn the shield into a red and white checker board (like the Croatian Coat of Arms). I'm not sure if everything being in red would look better, or keeping everything in the navy you've used and changing the background to the checkerboard. Either way, please leave this version up as I really like it as well!
I like this concept, would you move the lefthand edges of the B to be aligned together but leave the little spaces so it doesn't all connect? I hope that makes sense!
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Here's a tricky one for you, remove the fleur de lis, and turn the shield into a red and white checker board (like the Croatian Coat of Arms). I'm not sure if everything being in red would look better, or keeping everything in the navy you've used and changing the background to the checkerboard. Either way, please leave this version up as I really like it as well!
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