you got the right idea with the type of coloring, we are Colombian so we like bright, feminine, sexy and curvy, can you portray those aspects to the design?
we love the lettering of 20, can you make the coloring stronger, and the flower smaller but something more simple and Very CLASY at the same time, the blue aquamarine can be a great color to mix with the soft brown you are using and if you want to try the lettering black as well as the the flower can be mixed with black and the blue aquamarine.
great work so far, but we want to simplify it, because it's going to be used in all kinds of media, we got a bit carried away, we hope that you can help us out. :)