Hi, I am honored to be participating in your contest. Here is my design. I created a silhouette of a person who is mixed with figures that represent, exercise, health, welfare. Hope you like it. If you have comments, please let me know.
Lovely Daniel. Please correct the spelling, though -- it should be LTY fitness, not LTI, and a capital letter Y when you're spelling Life to Years. I like them both. This is hard! If you can withdraw and re-submit that wouild be great. I can't decide which colours I like better!
I don't know if this helps but I was also thinking I kind of like the way the one logo that his a figure for the Y works within the wording, however, I prefer your figure. Not sure if you can work a figure like yours into the wording? That could mess up the lovely Adding Life to Years lettering. Just a thought. Can you see comments I've made to other designers?
Entry #19 would be improved with more purple/blue combination than the stark red and blue combination. Also, more space between LTY and Fitness. Nice tries.
Please!! submit one with the same colours as #39 and the swirly thing, but use the graceful figure from #19, with the figure as the "I" in Fitness as you've done in 19. Ensure there's enough space between LTY and Fitness and I guess if you add the figure in as the I you'll need to experiment with capital letters. Thanks!
#47 is fluttering between #1 and 3. i would like to see one more change: a bit of yellow - perhaps in the rainbow, or perhaps the dot of the i. And if you could make Adding Life to Years (capital Y for Years) a bit clearer to read - more like my curent #2 choice.
Here's another comment for you on #47. The figure forming the "I" is very elegant, which is why I like it - it suggests femininity but is not obvious. However, the rest of the lettering is a little "hard" - perhaps something a bit softer would work (along with my previous comments). Good luck! Getting so close!
Hi, thanks for your comments and rating. I will work on your requirements and will have its design. I reiterate, it is a pleasure to work for your design.
I'm torn between 81 and 79. I like the lighter font, but now I miss the stronger look of the earlier ones. Perhaps the one change in one of these two would be, if possible, part of the rainbow could be purple or blue; this would provide more strength to that portion. I am trying to extend this contest by a few days to get these final things sorted out. Thanks!