LoungeDayLogo Design Contest

I like that you created a new typeface. How about to work more with colors and form of letters, and remove gradation background?

we appreciate your posts.

Regards

We prefer #104 to #105. #104 has a good potential.

Looking forward to seeing new posts from you.

hi, thanks for the feedback. I submit new revision, i hope you like it, thanks again

all the best
jekson

thanks for your new posts.

we ranked 1st, 2nd, 3rd tentatively.

I want you to improve your creation with those logos...your uniqueness is quite good.

thanks.

Y's orange slice is great.

how about try to use the orange slice instead of sunshine mark in word "lounge"

and if it is possible, could you make the logo simpler?

that would be fantastic.

hi, i submit new revision, thank you

jekson

the size of #133's orange is good.

could you put the #133's orange into #124's "lounge"?

then, I want you to make the 2 oranges simpler. now, oranges is too detailed.

thank you for your cooperation.

Honestly, your logos are most unique so far.
Orange slice... very good.

We think you can improve #140 and 142.

So we are very happy if we could have more shape variations from you.

Color is ok. I want you to make them a little more unique or simpler.
after all, one orange slice is enough in one logo.

Anyway, we really appreciate your many efforts!

Thanks!

Sohta

and orange slice and a glass should be together.

thanks for your #149. it is good.

but we think "Y" is too tall.

we think it is better that the bottom height of "Y" is as high as "g"

and orange could be simpler again.

thanks.

i submit new revision, thank you

all the best
jekson

thanks.

#162 good.

but we want capital letter with #162.
like "LoungeDay"

and I'm afraid that the orange became too simple... we can't recognize it as a orange...

ok, i submit new revision #162, thank you

all the best
jekson

# 163 is close to my ideal.

but the orange is too simple.

please make it a little bit detailed.

thanks a lot for your cooperation.

and "163's bottom and top of "Y" should be same as bottom height of "g" and top height of "D"

i submit new revision, thanks

all the best
jekson

sorry, I made a mistake in last message.
not 163. it was 166.

thanks for your posts.

but I still prefer 166 to 170...

I want more variation of 170...
It is getting closer to my ideal shape.

we discuss #166 and it looks like " alcohol"

we are going to choose you as one of 5 top designers.

I want you to make #166 like " beverage" or "coffee" or "tea" or "juice"....please avoid image of liquor.

thanks for your cooperation.

Sohta