Lori BonazzoliLogo Design Contest

#63

Hi,

Please let me know if you'd like any revisions. I'd be happy to provide them. Thanks!

Pam

The eye is in the right place, please try it just black and white with no colors or maybe just really subtle use of one color (red or purple)

Please try some type that is edgy like this but maybe sharper edged as the name is complicated and try it out next to the symbol as well

Also try angling the eyebrow down a bit more to create a more dramatic look

Very cool!

Thanks for the feedback! I'll revise my design accordingly and resubmit. Pam

#64, #65, #66 - eliminated the red, lessened the purple, angled the eyebrow, and changed the font

#67, #68, #69 - placed the text next to the symbol

Let me know if any of these appeal to you, or if you want to see revisions, etc. I'm always happy to provide more options based on your feedback. Thanks so much!

Pam

#86

slanted eyebrow even more, made iris heart more visible :)

Please make #67 more angled, more dramatic but with less lines - very simple, clean dramatic symbol and text - it's very close but it's a bit too busy

Try the color elsewhere other than above the eye, maybe in the eye, around the heart - please see my original mockup for how subtle we want color used

#87 - increased angle and reduced the amount of color, simplified lines

Let me know what else I can do to improve it for you. Thanks for the feedback!

Pam