Lori BonazzoliLogo Design Contest

hi!
This is my first try for the creation of your logo, don't hesitate to contat me if you wish to have any changes.
Best regards

Please make sure the eye is dramatized and very sharp (not sketch look), feminine - see this image of egyptian eye makeup for inspiration http://cdn2.stylecraze.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/09/Mineral-Eye-MAkeup-For-Egyptians.jpg

Great 1st try we look forward to more!

Hi, thanks for your feedback and suggestions. I hope my new entries are better!
Regards

I feel you are so close just missing the eye elements that make it more dramatic... maybe look at this dragon eye http://cf067b.medialib.glogster.com/media/6e/6eeb91e7241008d4f5d2b6811353abac40852dfff522a09e77b9ba8212c5d78c/dragon-2.jpg

See the angle of it, this is what we want for the eye itself

Please use a sharp edge for all outlines

I like the use of the figure but would also like to see some without a figure, the dramatic eye of horus and the lettering are most important

Please make sure the "eye of horus" (please google it) is authentic and then added on to

thank you!

Also please try to use maybe just one subtle hint of the red or purple and the rest black and white thank you!

Thanks for the suggestions, i'll work on it straight away.
see you later!

hi. #70 is my new entry, just let me know if i'm getting near it! This is basic, i can add anything you like.
Best regards