There is something really cool happening with #19 - I like it, try less to blend those colors and more on black and white and the illustration you have, define the eye of horus a bit more, try a few equally legible fonts
This is really cool! Google "Dramatic Egyptian eye makeup" - I like the use of the Yoga figure, the heart and eye, Keep at it this is awesome
I had to handraw the eye. And done 2 of them: This one #41 and this one #47. You can see the other versions o them.
Personally I love this one #51.
So use the half moon in the eye as you can see here #51 because is a position you do in yoga right? And also because looks like a cat eye. So like you said in your brief "I´am intense, physical and fierce" Moon and cat are a good mix i think of those words.