LokazoLogo Design Contest

Strengths : nice toucan, colorful logo
Weaknesses : for a luxury positionning we need something a little bit finner, what do you think of having the toucan on the right ?

Thanks for your logo & good luck Dotwoman :)

Thank you so much for the feedback. I have moved the toucan to the right and made the font thinner...

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Thanks Dotwoman, the #9 is great !

Your logo is very good and as you are a great designer, here are some points of improvement for your logo:

1. We think that the shape of the beak can still be improved, look at this two links, they are more roundish : http://myanimalblog.files.wordpress.com/2008/03/99bz_kanantik-toucan.jpg, http://www.babygadget.net/toucan-sticker.jpg

2 .Could you also try to do an entire toucan on the logo please ?

3. On your logo ranked first, could you align Amazonia with Lokazo on the right

Thanks for your involvement & good luck Dotwoman :)

Thank you for your detailed feedback. I will continue to try to make this logo 100% perfect for you. I have rounded the beak and completed the toucan... I like how he looks over his shoulder into the logo, and hope that you do as well...

Thank you for your new logo.

Strengths: the toucan is very nice
Weaknesses: Amazonia is now a little bit too close to the toucan; the toucan seems too high: above Lokazo it's well integrated but under I don't know, it's strange ... any solution ?

Good luck!

more toucan interpretations

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Hello Dotwoman.

Thank you for entries.

#53
Strengths : nice toucan, colours are better.
Weaknesses : The beak can still be improved. Check ranked 1st logo. The beak looks more like a toucan beak. We think if you change the beak it will be much better looking. Please note that we are talking about the beak shape. We are not asking you to copy the beak of the rank 1st logo...just improve shape of yours. Thank you.

Good luck!

modified beak ...

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Great ! Thank you Dotwoman :)

#108 : Very nice logo! Could you try with a slightly thicker Lokazo please? We also prefer the coton flower included into the O like on your logo #66

#112

Thank you for adding.
We have a question about logo #112 and #113, where is the difference?

We are really sorry to bother you again with this, but we still feel uncomfortable with the beak.
We found a picture which shows well the beak shape we wish to get in your logo:
http://www.maxi-fond-ecran.com/fond-ecran/animaux/toucan_002.jpg

We are sorry to be so much demanding with it.

Thank you.

Thanks for your continued feedback. I have modified the beak for you. The later submission as well as this one, is a slightly thicker font.

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and don't worry, you're not being too picky ... it's your logo, and you want it to be perfect, as do I and I will happily make changes until it is 100% the way you want it.

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Thanks for your new beak, it's hard to choose! We have another request for your, could you do something closer to the #66 for the coton flower? in your last logos, it seems a little bit too big into the O.

I don't mind working with you like this at all! I aim to please. I reduced the size of the cotton boll and put black behind it as previously. I hope you like it.

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and an earlier iteration of the cotton boll

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Thanks Dotwoman, could you please keep the coton flower of #128 & use it on logos #113 & #114? we prefer the red color on the beak.

:)

Thank you :)

The main problem with your logo is if we use the toucan alone like Lacoste with the crocodile, it seems a little bit strange to us. Could you work on this point during the last few hours please?

better balanced bird...

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Thank you Dotwoman but we don't like it very much with its legs like this. Sorry ^^

off with the legs then!

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... on a branch

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more abstract

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#153

Hello Dotwoman.
We really like what you tried on logo 153.
We like the toucan too.
The idea of making the toucan to stand on the line is good.

1) Could you please add small blue feet to the toucan  (but something simple which doesn't look like chicken feet)
2) Could you make the tail to be just a litle bit longer.
3) Also could you try to improve the line on what the toucan is standing. Make is thiner please.

Here is a pic we like, we think the body shape of this toucan is great and its position too.
http://the-chicken-jesus.cowblog.fr/images/toucan.jpg


Thank you for your efforts.

I would be happy to make additional changes, but only the number one choice can submit during judging.

a revision for you

Thank you Dotwoman. It's very hard to choose a winner because you did a great job with Nancy. Her design is a little bit closer to what we are looking for through the lines of her logo. If you want to continue improving your logo, here are some points on which you can work:

1. Could try a logo without the coton flower please?
2. Could you try a logo with a toucan on a coton flower?

Good luck & thank you for all the job you did on our logo.

Thanks for your new logos. Could we see #171 without the coton flower into the O please?

Thanks Dotwoman

Please let me know if there is anything else you would like to see...

Your last logo is better. We will also give an opportunity to Nancy to improve her logo and we will come back to you later.

Thanks for all the job you did on our logo.