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I don't think the writing works in this one but the hand from #53 is perfect and its dimensions should replace all others
I am at a crossroads in this phase as I will be presenting the top 4 logos on Thursday AEDST
I can do this only if the logo is in 1st position in the Selection phase of the contest. Let me know when you have changed that and I will make the edits. You said you wanted to make cufflinks or pins and this simple design would lend itself to that concept very well. Carol
I have some minor tweaking. I am advised that the middle finger is a little high. Can you lower it to about half way between where it is now and the height of the other two.
Change the thick border to a thin border around the stone with the writing outside in the blue.
I also want to lower the two side "thumbs" toward the equator as a test, but on a separate example
I've been looking at your #3 and the proportions of the hand a slightly different to this one. It is only subtle but it is more favourable. Please make this one the same as that.
Also if you would remove the banner and name altogether and do a free flowing text underneath
Can you remove the small brick pieces and extend those which are cut off by the circle?
When I mentioned sandstone, I refer to your #3 work
Yellow and blue is the colour of one of our football teams and not ideal
my primary business is promotional merchandise - so I understand how to do a version that would work for those applications as well. - and some things I could actually get for you in Australia! (depending on details)
made vector from an actual photo I took at the western wall - however this would make your logo 'full color' and sometime hard to print so you may need a version with fewer colors that would eliminate the wall effect.
I need to go through thousands of my photos from my 5 trips to Israel to find a good one of the wall for the pattern - I dont want to use the internet photos - that is really against the site rules. But that will be fun - may take a while. thanks fo working with me. Carol
I've noticed that the bricks here are stacked rather than interlocking
Can you make them more interlocked and like the Western Wall - if you get my meaning
This continues to intrigue the members and I think they have warmed to it's modern feel. Need to introduce some blue. Can I see the white hand and writing in the dark blue.
The proportions of the hand are good
Would you make it larger in the same aspect ration so that the finger begin to protrude over the top of the circle
Sorry I am less responsive than usual - spent over 5 hours waiting at the Social Security office today - I am not in a positive state to work well on your design - will try more tomorrow! Thanks for working with me. Carol
Please change the proportionss of the hand as the side fingers are now very big. They should be more subtle like #6. Their position is now very high on the hand with short fingers
The proportions of this is taller than it is wide
I like the proportions of #3 more as it has a bit more width. The hand itself is even more similar in height and width
and I forgot to mention the dove! It is very masculine now, perhaps tone it down a little as it is more like a war bird instead of a peace one.
Middle finger to be a little shorter
I like that you've rounded the base
Would like to incorporate elements from #3 that I previously mentioned
Top of wall to be irregular
Square and compasses smaller
I don;t think the writing works on this one but may work similar to #3
thanks
Was originally thinking writing should be contained inside the hand (as mentioned in the brief) but also open to outside it along the bottom either curved or straight either cutting through the hand or below it
Lines between middle fingers to be further removed. Middle finger reduce height a little.
Brick wall to be less regular in both the size of the blocks and along the top of the wall
Can you try the dove facing front with wing outstretched?
3 middle fingers do not need to have lines coming down into the hand
Maybe give yourself more room inside the palm by widening it?
Old city is iconic but not preferred - would like to see brickwork
Try words wrapped inside and outside bottom of the hand
Have other style Hamsa (I taught a lesson on them a few weeks ago to the 4th graders) I have to go back and re-read the brief - was not sure about square and compasses part. maybe explain more?
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This version but with the writing from #48
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I don't think the writing works in this one but the hand from #53 is perfect and its dimensions should replace all others
I am at a crossroads in this phase as I will be presenting the top 4 logos on Thursday AEDST
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Change the thick border to a thin border around the stone with the writing outside in the blue.
I also want to lower the two side "thumbs" toward the equator as a test, but on a separate example
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The proportions are out
I think we'll focus on the your other ones
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Also if you would remove the banner and name altogether and do a free flowing text underneath
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Larger hand with fingers starting to protrude over the edge of the circle
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When I mentioned sandstone, I refer to your #3 work
Yellow and blue is the colour of one of our football teams and not ideal
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And sandstone colour instead of gold?
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we would also use the logo on a tie and/or cuff links
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We are happy without them on these more modern designs
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Can you make them more interlocked and like the Western Wall - if you get my meaning
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There are a few miles and time zones between us
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Would you make it larger in the same aspect ration so that the finger begin to protrude over the top of the circle
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I need to have a good look through them to give feedback
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I like the proportions of #3 more as it has a bit more width. The hand itself is even more similar in height and width
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Middle finger to be a little shorter
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Would like to incorporate elements from #3 that I previously mentioned
Top of wall to be irregular
Square and compasses smaller
I don;t think the writing works on this one but may work similar to #3
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Was originally thinking writing should be contained inside the hand (as mentioned in the brief) but also open to outside it along the bottom either curved or straight either cutting through the hand or below it
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Glad we can work together on this.
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Brick wall to be less regular in both the size of the blocks and along the top of the wall
Can you try the dove facing front with wing outstretched?
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Maybe give yourself more room inside the palm by widening it?
Old city is iconic but not preferred - would like to see brickwork
Try words wrapped inside and outside bottom of the hand
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It is missing that old city element
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Needs "square and compasses"