These dancers aren't quite right. You can take them out - I think maybe the drummer is the only visual needed. But I would go back to your original font and placement of the letters and simply make the word 'in' in a contrasting cursive style.
I really love how you've incorporated the rumba player and a stylized Cuban flag into the letter U. Love the colors and the texture of the lettering. The domino tiles almost seem like an afterthought now because rumba really feels like the theme of your design. Two suggestions: maybe play with the font styles and try to combine two different types -- having it all in that style looks a little too block-lettery (is that a word?) and rigid -- maybe have "Local in" some form of cursive style, or maybe just the word "in" should be different. Secondly, instead of domino tiles, I wonder what other small image you can use that follows the same theme of rumba or rumba dancers. If you could include rumba dancers, I think that would be great. I like the angle it's on and the sketchy quality of the outside border.
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Feedback on any of the designs would help me design a better logo, according to your choice.
Please let me know if you need any changes to the design.
Thank you
Sreekant