I think I prefer the closed mouth, so if there's a way to make the mouth from the previous version on the rest of the head of this version, I think that'll be great!
Hi! I'm so sorry for the complete delay in responding!
I think we've settled on this design as our favorite, but we were wondering if we could make a few more tiny tweaks to Lizzi (the lighter one).
Her eyes are a little bit squinty, and kind of obstructed by her cheek hair (which I know is how that was in the picture). If her eyes could be a little more pronounced (without being crazy big or anything), and if her nose was a little bit more shaped like an upside down triangle, I think that would be great!
Okay, and my husband thinks the yorkie (the one currently on the right) looks a little chubby in the face...so apparently if she can look slightly thinner... LOL!
Hi! Me again! :) I have a few other little things I'd like to see.
The first is silly, but if you could switch the placement of the dogs (I know you did it as they were in the picture, but based on the name of the store, they're backwards), and maybe work on their eyes just a little. The feedback from our staff was that they look a little crazy-eyed (not a lot...just a little).
Also, would it be possible to see with a bit of a pop of color in the text (not necessarily on the dogs, because that would be weird). I'd like to see it just a little brighter!
I love the direction of the dogs in particular. Would you mind producing a little more variance on the name of the business so that, in some scenarios, it could stand alone. I'm thinking of times we'd have to print on a t-shirt, or some weird/normal scenarios where the dogs may not translate as well.
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Thank you!!
Thank you so much!
Thank you :)
I think we've settled on this design as our favorite, but we were wondering if we could make a few more tiny tweaks to Lizzi (the lighter one).
Her eyes are a little bit squinty, and kind of obstructed by her cheek hair (which I know is how that was in the picture). If her eyes could be a little more pronounced (without being crazy big or anything), and if her nose was a little bit more shaped like an upside down triangle, I think that would be great!
Thank you so much!
The first is silly, but if you could switch the placement of the dogs (I know you did it as they were in the picture, but based on the name of the store, they're backwards), and maybe work on their eyes just a little. The feedback from our staff was that they look a little crazy-eyed (not a lot...just a little).
Also, would it be possible to see with a bit of a pop of color in the text (not necessarily on the dogs, because that would be weird). I'd like to see it just a little brighter!
Thanks so much! :)
Really good direction so far though!