Great designs so far in entries 3, 4, and 5. It feels bright and earthy, which I love. I really like that you used clear images of the home. #3 is my favorite of the three images. I like that it is centered, and I think the sun image inside the house in Entry #3 is really nice. I don't like the flame images for the i's but it was a creative idea. Perhaps instead of 3 buildings, you can keep the middle one and integrate vegetables or something for healthy cooking on the left, and an image of a person stretching on the right. (see attached images for ideas). It would be great to see the design integrate and merge our main 3 elements which are health, home and spirit into 1 beautiful, inspirational image, eminating holistic health. Also, I think the colors remind me too much of gardening and lawns, which is only a small part of what we do, so I'd like to wither see another color integrated or trying out different color schemes. Love the idea so far! Nice work!
Great work! Thank you for putting the design into an emblem. I am so excited about the possibilities in entries #11 and #9. I love how you worked to merge the different design elements into an emblem. I didn't like the plants on the side of the person in #10 because it looks like they are coming out of the person, with a strange effect.
Try putting the person's arms up in the air, think that they are stretching in the morning, looking at the rising sun, excited and inspired to start a new day, looking radiant, light emanating from them. Here is an image I love: http://blogs.glam.com/glamspirit/files/2008/10/sun.jpg but arching back like the man is in this image: http://www.wonderhowto.com/images/gfx/gallery/633892641325102973.jpg. I actually put an image up in our project brief which is perfect but I cannot find where I got it from so please check that out.
Also, I don't think the colors work as well in the emblems of #10 and #11. It reminds me too much of farming. But I love how it looks with #9. Even though 9 isnt an emblem, I ranked it high because it is important that the design feel bright, and I like 9's elegance. So maybe its the heaviness of the brown and green in the emblems, it feels too "grounding" and not as "light." Let's try lightening up the colors a bit. The overall image should radiate light...
i really love in entry #9 how clear and bold our name and slogan are. it feels that there is a nice balance between the image and words. i didnt think i would want to see the slogan in the logo, but the way you have presented it here is really nice.
i love in entry #11 how the house is at the persons heart and the star at their third eye center in their forehead, its very symbolic and really speaks to the heart and meaning of our business! thank you for that.
i dont like the hair and the overall shape of the person. see above mentioned links for ideas. a person more lifelike would be great to see!
The only other feedback I have for these images...Try eliminating the brown outer ring, as well as the green colored inner ring in addition to the above suggestions for font and colors.
dear ch, the design without brown ring have been uploaded. and i am provide with another modification for #9. please let me know if u want something changing.
can you try keeping the white backround behind the person like in entry #18 and eliminating the brown ring like in entry #32? and keeping the font all white and one major concern i have is that the slogan is going to be way too small when we bring it to print on business cards. can you try to keep this round image with only the business name living light nice and large?
thank you so much! entry #44 is really listening to our vision!
i love it with only the business name! it really draws your eye to just that and the image.
i also really love entry #42. id like to see entry #42 with the shape of the person and the colors like in entry #44. that would really give me what im looking for!
also, if you could remove the stripes and just have a bold green border.
Thank you for all your effort but we are sure that we will not be going with your design. I have really enjoyed working with you, and if you feel inspired, we are open to something totally different (there is still time left) but I did not want to take up any more of your time and effort on this one. Luck to you!