Hi, Here is my entry. My aim was to create a something Simple, Bold yet elegant. I did this by constructing a collaged city-scape of all the icons in and around Camden (Throught the years) that make it a beautiful place to live. I truly hope this is to your liking and I eagerly wait your feedback.
I like the image and the tradition street sign. I also like that the Live is a smaller font. You are exactly right in highlighting Camden. Please play around with the text. Also, can you make the street sign have round edges - go with more of a bubble feel. Also, can you change the colors, maybe blue and grey or another similar combination?
Hi, I thank you very much for you feedback. Please see my amendments re: said feedback. I also added my own interpretation to the logo. As you see I have two colors on the logo, grey and blue. The tonalities in the grey help to represent Camden's industrial past, with the exhaust pipes in the lightest grey, the bridge and the buildings represent the present Camden with the mid-tone grey and the foreground represents the promising future of Camden with the boldest grey tone. This use of tonalities and some depth to the mark and makes it more interesting to look at. As for the blue, it compliments the grey and very boldly highlights Camden. I truly hope you like this. Thanks for listen. David
Thanks for making the changes. I talked to some colleagues and we do like the logo. It definitely gives the historical and urban feel that we are looking for. We do, however feel that it is missing the youth component that we need to drive livecamden.com. My colleagues suggested that you change the sign color be a rusty orange and the city, logo be the teal color you used in the original logo. I also like the fist logo, without the flag. Can you play around with the font? Maybe the font will be able to give it the youthful/fresh feel. Please keep Camden capitalized. Thanks Looking forward to seeing the revisions.
Hi. Thanks again for the feedback. Here is my (first) revision: The Orange and Teal, No Smoke Stacks and a different (more youthful font). Please tell me if I am going in the right direction especially with the font choice. Thanks again. David.
The font is great. Can you make some variations of this "first revised" logo? Please make the street sign all one color (no red) but a different color then the city in the background. Also, can you try to make a new logo with a similar feel but one that has a more modern, two post street sign. One sign that says live and the other that says Camden. If you Google image antique street signs, you will find one that says Broadway, Main St. That style.
Hi, I truly appreciate the feedback you have been providing. Please my amendments and interpretation of your instructions. I hope I am close to delivering what you want. Thanks again, David
Hi: The new logos are great. A few suggestions/questions:
1. Can you please make the sign in #14 all orange and remove the white line/wave that runs through the sign? 2. Can you make a version of #14 with the change above and use the font from #3? 3. Can you make some different versions of logo #29? 4. Can you make #29 less bold. A colleague and I were reviewing some of your other designs and they all have a subtleness to them, which we really like? 5. Can you make the sign post for #30 smaller? 6. Can you make the sign background for #29 teal and the letters white, using the font from #29? 7. We really like #30. Can you make the background (the city) a little less bold, make it look more like a facade. It looks too busy to us? Thanks
Hi, Thank you so much for selecting my logo. I really worked hard on it. Especially because I was so intimidated by the scale of what i represents. Here are your requests, as I understand them. Thank You, David.