Hello Brendan, I like the direction you seem to be headed. Entry #6 has the most appeal to me thus far. Is there any way you can incorporate a sky or horizon with laser beams? Also, perhaps make the wording a bit more technical looking? Please don't delete your entries thus far. I do like your direction, and I look forward to seeing any future entries you submit. Thanks
Thank you so much for the feed back, I shall work on something hopefully amazing but it is now very early in the morning so I shall get onto it as soon as I get into work in the morning
Hello again Brendon. I've shown your work to my staff. They seemed to like #18 and had some requests, if I may. Can you please make the words "Laser Shows" as prominent as the words, "Liquid Sky"? The general feeling is that folks need to see the words laser shows. Lastly, can you perhaps make the colors within the wording a bit more corporate looking? Hot pink and that shade of blue don't quite work right. In the end, however, everyone liked your direction. I look forward to seeing what can you do. Thanks so much Brendan.