Hi, thank you for the feedback!
I will submit all the revisions you requested, but this contest is currently in the "selection" mode. Only first ranked designer is able submit. So, if you would like to see my revisions please re-rank.
I am sorry, but according to LT rules we are not allowed to contact by email before the contest is complete. After the end of the contest we can send all the additional variations of the logo via email.
Thanks.