Thank you for submitting, juma. I prefer this version a little more than your compass submission. It has good potential. A fews things...1) I love the font usage. One thing I'd like to see is a thin horizontal line separating "Lightpath" and "Wealth Advisors". 2) To follow that same style, I'd like to see a thin grey line with a few pixels of white space surrounding the circle. The line in the text and around the circle should be of similar weight. 3) I like the winding path leading to the horizon. Can we change the sun out for a 4-point star? Like a guiding star. Instead of the winding path exiting near the far right of the circle, I'd like to see it meet the horizon closer to the center (although it doesn't have to be centered). You can place the star in the sky above where that path meets the horizon. My preference would be for the path to enter from the bottom-right, wind and meet the horizon just left of center. 4) Lastly, instead of the horizon slopping down to the right, I'd actually like to see the horizon slope up to the right. Meaning, the left edge of the horizon should be 15-20 degrees below the right edge. Hope that makes sense? If not, feel free to reach out. Thank you so much for the help!
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