We're so close! I mocked something up to help you. When I referred to including a 4-point star, this is more of what I was talking about (see link below). If you can apply these changes on the one's you last submitted, we'll be there. https://www.dropbox.com/s/v31vdj7c03l7rt9/four-pt-star.png?dl=0
The revision looks terrific and this is a strong contender. The winding path and font are perfect, don't change a thing there. After some overnight reflection, there's one more set of variations I'd like to see. 1) Let's remove the sun and replace with a 4-point star in the sky. A guiding star in the night. It may look a little biblical, but for this business it works. I'll let you best determine size and placement. 2) Let's swap the green and the grey in the square. Meaning, put the green below the horizon and the grey above. Although I like what you've done, I'm curious to see what it looks like reversed. 3) I like the square, but would also like to see a circle version (with thin line around the circle) as well. Great job...we're almost there!
Very nicely done. I like it. A couple things to edit, if possible...1) could you drop the sun down closer to the end of the trail and make it to where you can see half the sun shining over the horizon? I'd like to give that a look. 2) I'm very keen on having the text's horizontal line a little thinner (match the thickness of the square's outline) and "Wealth Advisors" in a lighter serif font. With those changes you'll be a strong contender.
A very nice entry. I like the thin pixel line around the square. I would like to see the removal of the tree. Another suggestion would be to put a thin pixel line between "Lightpath" and "Wealth Advisors". Thanks for the help!!
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