I liked the creative flare on both #2 and #4. I would like to see the name on one line on #2 and a little different font on the slogan that is simple to read. Although I don't know if that will take away from the way the sun/horizon sits over the top of it which ties it together. I hope I am not confusing you. #4 reminded me of water and was very nice and flowing, however I would maybe like to see a sun that stands out a little more. The person was a nice addition and seemed to give a sence of renewal. With both these logos I am wondering if you can continue to play around with these concepts a little more, I do like the variations in colors. Maybe different fonts in the name as well to give me more to choose from, I like flowing but not too swirly. Looks great so far!
Thank you Sue for the additions! I like the overall flowing softness of the artwork. You have stuck with the message of comfort, renewal and hope which is what we are trying to convey. I got some feedback from my partner and want to pass those comments along to you. #17 would like to see without the person. Also she would like Lifestyle Wellness maybe in blues/teals/tourquise to have the name stand out more. The blues on the suns rays was throwing her off a bit. Maybe tone that down a little or give some variations in sun colors? The slogan is better for me too! Overall I love how you have encorporated the a number of colors.
Thank you Sue... okay so #34 & #33 are the best out of the four recents. Would like to maybe see the middle of the sun not completely filled in like you did in #16. Also maybe have the yellow of the sun be a little less in the orangey yellow scale colors. However it is not that I dislike those colors I am just wondering if I would like it a little more. #33 maybe have a yellow line under the sun rather than the green. #34 would also like to see a variation without the blue line under Lifestyle Wellness. And maybe see something with more of a curved line under the sun like it is under the biz name. Something more to play around with. I am waiting to hear back from my partner. I hope it is soon to give you more feed back. #32 & #31 the sun is right where my eye goes and I dont want to take away from my biz name and slogan!
Hello Sue. I know I asked for a little softer colors on the sun, after seeing that I think I am liking a little more brighter sun, some of them are looking a little to difused... but still very nice. Also I do like the ones without the curved line under the business name. How would it look with that same curved line under the sun instead of the one that is currently there? Or perhaps something similar to the curved lines like in #4? Also we want to appeal to both Male & Female so I am not wanting to go too feminine with sun colors. Thank you...