Hi Anna,
Really like the changes you have made. Can you please make the words below the line a little bolder and bigger. Also, we kind of like the idea of the D at the end of lifeguard being as big as the L (maybe make all the ALLIANCE letters the same size.)
As far as the outlines of the people go, I'm not crazy about the style of the man's hair - too much like Elvis. We were hoping to have shadows that are more generalized, or with broader ethnic appeal. Hope that makes sense.
Thanks,
John