Concept - The word 'Life' in green symbolizing growth. Green stems attached to blossoms that surround the number 40 symbolizes the green growth that blossoms at 40.
Love #8! Would love to see another version of #8 that uses a more block-style font for the 4-0. Also, since the client isn't a fan of yellowish greens, maybe we could try a version of this where the green text/numbers are deep red (leaving the blossom branches/leaves green still). If the petals of blossoms had a little deep red at the tip, then the red text might tie in ok.
I like your thinking on entry #7, but it could use a few modifications, if you're up for it. I'd love to see it! Thanks!
- Change "life" to a the same font as used in Entry #3) - Change the color of the flowers to a deep, bergundy red - Change the "life" and "starts at" text to the same deep, bergundy red - Not sure about the tagline color...use your judgment
Here’s another version of #8 that uses a more block-style font for the 40. I changed the yellowish green to an olive green, and changed “at, 40” to a deep red. I also added per your suggestion, hints of the deep red to the blossoms. Any other changes welcome.
I love #9...this design is fast becoming my favorite. Could you make a few modifications to it?
- I think the olive is a bit too dark, but I appreciate where you were trying to go with this. Can we lighten it up a bit, but not quite as light as #8? - Love the bergundy color you chose, let's keep it! I'd like the 4-0 to be the same font you used for these numbers in #2 - The red in the flowers wasn't quite what I had in mind. I really liked the flowers in #8, but I was thinking that you could build the red into the white-to-pink gradient where the red is only peaking through at the end of the gradient spectrum. - I'm not crazy about the green outline on the flower petals. Can we thin this out and maybe change the outline color to pink or bergundy?
I'd like to see a duplicate version (after the above changes) with the 4-0 in pink and the "life starts at" in bergundy.
Hi, sorry I missed your comments from yesterday. Here are the changes that I've made to design #9. I've lighten the olive green for the stems and leaves. I changed the 40 to the 40 font in the #2 design, But I lengthened it so that it fits better within the whole design. I added the hints of deep red initially because when I tried to add the deep red to the gradient it dominated the magenta color, so per your suggestion of changing the outline green to a pink or deep red, I changed the green outline to deep red so that it still has the flow of deep red throughout the design.
I think I like #30 best right now. I'd like to see the outline in the flowers much thinner and would like the "at" to be in the same bergundy red. Thanks!
I've uploaded a revision to design #30. I thinned the burgundy around the petals, changed the color of the 'at' to burgundy, and I also added a shadow of burgundy to each of the end petals.
I love it! Just what we were looking for. I'm showing the top selections to the client now...best of luck!!! Thanks for all your revisions, very much appreciated! I think you have a STRONG chance of winning ;)