Slight modification to #77
I beefed up the outline on the banner where it extends beyond the circular border. That way it flows into the circle and binds the logo together.
I really like your ideas Pam. You're def going to be in my final rankings. When you have time, I'd like to see this one with the changed monogram, fuller hips, but with some color on the mail box like maybe some flowers or design. See attached pics of mail boxes. Thanks! :)
Def like letter gone. Can we move her left hand so it's not in the air. Maybe both hands on the fence? Also, I was wondering if we could have a detail on the fence like a latch, like it's by the opening of the fence. I love the letters and her face. She's beautiful like my momma was.
Removed the letter and envelop, gave her fuller hips, made her lean more on the fence, and made the "BB" font twirlier.
Let me know what you'd like revised on this entry.
More to come!
Thanks! Pam
Good morning!
I'll remove the letter and make her hips fuller. And exaggerate the lean on the fence. I'll also work on a design with her in front of a pretty door.
Thanks so much for the feedback. You're doing fine with your comments. Direction/feedback from the contest holder is always appreciated. :)
Pam
Hi there Pam. I'm thinking I'm not super stoked about her holding a letter. What about her leaning on the fence. Maybe with fuller hips. I've never done this before so I'm sorry if anything I'm doing or saying isn't cool. I'm also wondering about her standing in front of a pretty door. :)
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Please let me know if you'd like revisions on any of my entries. I'd be happy to provide any changes you might request. Feedback welcomed. Thanks!
Pam
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Changed the color of the lettering to white instead of cream.
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Simplified and changed the color of the lettering to cream, and eliminated the contrasting outline.
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I beefed up the outline on the banner where it extends beyond the circular border. That way it flows into the circle and binds the logo together.
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Made the lettering blue, banner white with blue outline on banner and outer circle. Let me know if I misinterpreted your directions. Thx!
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New border shapes. Text not running over the figure. Let me know what you'd like changed. Thx!
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Added flowers to the mailbox, and below, and strengthened its outline. The figure now has the fuller hips. :)
Let me know what else should be done to this one. Thx!
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Strengthened the outline of the figure in certain areas, and added the red rule around the inner circle.
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Here's the modification of #33:
Her smile is back, and the whole figure is visible. Let me know what else needs revising on this one. Thanks!
Pam
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Should I remove the letter and envelop?
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Moved her left hand down onto the fence and added a latch and more detail to the fence/gate. Let me know what else you'd like to see.
In the meantime, I'm proceeding with the pretty door idea. Thx!
Pam
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Removed the letter and envelop, gave her fuller hips, made her lean more on the fence, and made the "BB" font twirlier.
Let me know what you'd like revised on this entry.
More to come!
Thanks! Pam
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I'll remove the letter and make her hips fuller. And exaggerate the lean on the fence. I'll also work on a design with her in front of a pretty door.
Thanks so much for the feedback. You're doing fine with your comments. Direction/feedback from the contest holder is always appreciated. :)
Pam
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Please let me know if you'd like revisions on any of my entries. I'd be happy to provide any changes you might request. Feedback welcomed. Thanks!
Pam