Life's Celebrations by ShariLogo Design Contest

Didn't see this before. Now it's perfect. By the way, I don't think that I can close the contest until it goes into the second phase. Which is tomorrow. I have a help request in though to see if I can

Or you can try #17

You're right. I'm better off with #15. Thnx for all that you did! I LOVE IT!

It is small part, we can't make it more detail

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Ok, i will try again

The elephant/spear. For some reason it doesn't seem as Earthy. It seems still too harsh for the rest of the art. Does that make sense?

in which part?

For some reason that part of the art doesn't flow with the rest. It's not soft enough, I don't know how to say it any other way than that

While I'm doing that, appease me and see if there's a way to soften those two figures even more. For some reason the only thing that's outstanding to me

try to find some button at your contest pages or profile, i dont know :) and ends the contest, then i will upload my final files

Spot on! What do I do now to final it?

No problem,
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Everything is perfect except the location of the elephant/spearhead. I like them better where they were in #13, just maybe a shade or 2 lighter. Or maybe try an outline and softer fill. Also, if I'm not being too picky, I would like the trunk of the elephant to come up even further so that it comes to about the forehead. Ty

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Thanks for the feedback. You're right. So the symbols definitely stay in. However, they need to be a little softer ( blend into the wedding) and the elephants trunk needs to be curled farther up. I definitely like the feathers better from #11. There's symbolism there too with it being an odd number of feathers. So let's go back to those for sure. And let's try a little softer on the right side of the heart as well. Otherwise, I think we're there

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and it it not too much IF they are the important symbol.

The right feather needs to face the other way. But what do u think about the arrowhead/elephant. too much?

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Could you try the two items inside this heart too please? (Sorry)

And let's try and add a small Indians arrowhead as well as a small elephant within the webbing of the heart dream catcher.

Could you put the feather back on the left side of the heart and I think we are there!

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Ok i will try

Thanks

Oh. And put the writing like it is on the first one

Maybe below the last flower

What if we put the hearts in the very middle instead of on top? Leave everything else around it the same. Would it be too much what if we put the hearts in the very middle instead of on top? Leave everything else around it the same. Would it be too much? Let's try

I love his one. This might be it but I want to play around with the #2 entry first.