Please add back in "Education Fund" and use grey color with lines that extend outward from right and left of text to meet the end of the text on the lines directly above and below it. Once these changes are complete, we can finish the contest.
I'm still liking the the 1st ranked logo the most, therefore let me be a bit more specific on my thoughts... Change "Education Fund" text to a grey color and place a line centered to the middle of the text and extend to the left and right side of the "Life Development Institute" text directly above. Change "Their Dream, Your Donation" text to the color green that matches the person above and change font to a more elegant font perhaps use the font style that was used in submission #108. Finally, use a text size and height that distributes the text to match the width of the text and line above.
I hope this makes sense. Today, I am back in the office and will be checking back routinely, so that we can get this wrapped up.
Looking great! Please make a design that separates company name from Education Fund and make both font lines same thickness. Tagline does not pop as much as we would like it.
This is great, our CEO decided to keep the "Their Dream, Your Donation" tagline after all, so I kept your original submission. No changes required, we will update you at the end of "Finalists" time frame.
The logo you designed that is ranked higher is better. We like the individual holding the star, but the rest of the design needs revision. Also, please remove tagline.
Please remove tagline. Fabulous, overall design (logo seems to encapsulate the overall mission), font and color scheme but feel free to revise design elements according to changes listed above.
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I'm still liking the the 1st ranked logo the most, therefore let me be a bit more specific on my thoughts... Change "Education Fund" text to a grey color and place a line centered to the middle of the text and extend to the left and right side of the "Life Development Institute" text directly above. Change "Their Dream, Your Donation" text to the color green that matches the person above and change font to a more elegant font perhaps use the font style that was used in submission #108. Finally, use a text size and height that distributes the text to match the width of the text and line above.
I hope this makes sense. Today, I am back in the office and will be checking back routinely, so that we can get this wrapped up.
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