Oh sorry. Those revisions was with adjusted slogan. In this version of the logo, I made the letter "Y", of the slogan, same level horizontally with the period of the last sentence, but it creates an optical illusion, to be more looking not balance, maybe the period of the last part of the sentence was the problem, so I adjusted it. Instead of the period, I made the "N" of the last letter of the slogan level horizontally with the Y of the first letter of the slogan. Sorry for my bad english. Hope you can get my point.
My partner points out... it is the period that is making it appear visually off. I suppose the solution is to manually pull it just a bit to the right. Make sense?
This is 99% perfect Jerry. The very last thing I'd say is that the slogan is still slightly off center, and needs to be rotated a bit further to the right. If you can move YOUR PETS. OUR PASSION. to center I think that's all we need. Thank you so very much for your hard and excellent efforts on this! Dawn
Please check #107 and #108. About the flower wreath you purchased, I will inform the admin first before using it. As a designer here in Logotournament, we designers are not allowed to use a stock photos from the internet. I will ask the admin if it will allowed because you purchased it. Hope you understand. But the wreath flowers I made is vector, means its good for the logo, for printing without any distracting its quality in any sizes, and I also change a little bit its colors. Thanks and God bless!
Hello Jerry. This is getting much closer to perfect. Now I'm going to adjust a couple minor areas. 1. Can you make the slogan: YOUR PETS. OUR PASSION. the boldness level used for the words PET BOUTIQUE, and remove the bold from the words PET BOUTIQUE? 2. I like the placement of the slogan. However, it's currently a bit too close to the pet drawing - the S is overlapping cat ear. Can you slightly enlarge logo so that there are few points space between cat ears and words? 3. The flower wreath does not look identical to the ones I purchased. The original has softer colors and more impressionist flowers. Are you able to use the exact art I purchased? I'm also wondering if the design would look a bit less "busy" if we removed flowers from area underneath words Leo & Sassy's.
This is closest presently. I'd just like to see YOUR PETS. OUR PASSION. and PET BOUTIQUE in the same font as #32. I like that you added flowers underneath, but I'd like to use the flowers I purchased and uploaded. I'm also seeing them in the areas. I've marked.
Hi Jerry, 1. You did not swap out font for PET BOUTIQUE and YOUR PETS. OUR PASSION. 2. Are you able to use the wildflower drawings that I purchased and uploaded to add to the area I marked up?
I apologize if this is a repeat comment. This is my first time using service and I left long comment I now can't find! Please leave design #98 as is. I love what you've done with eye and returning dog to smaller scale. Can we match the font in this logo for the words: PET BOUTIQUE and YOUR PETS. OUR PASSION. I also really liked when you substituted a small heart shape for the apostrophe in Sassy's. Finally, I will upload a wildflower clip art I purchased to use for areas where I've noted to add flower border.
Thanks a lot for the feedback. Please check revision #97, Also #98 and #99 with flowers versions. Hope you like it. Just feel free to ask if you want changes. God bless!
Hi Jerry. We may use a single color rendering in deep red for single color use - however for the main logo... . See new uploads for additional views of pets. Here are our comments: 1. Use the font in #32. 2. Leave the color of Sassy the cat as in #59 BUT, Sassy has one green eye- so please make eye green, and his nose a light brown, not grey. 3. Leo the dog is ok as shown in #19 - only adjustment is that Leo's nose is chocolate brown. 4. Color scheme for the logo in general should be to leave the red outline of this but I'd like to try the lettering in dark chocolate brown and the bottom half of the logo can have a tan or taupe background, and the top is fine to be the light yellow you use. I'd remove the sunburst behind the pets as I think it detracts from your excellent drawing. Finally - the building is surrounded by lovely flower gardens. Could you work a small floral wrap possibly on either side of the top half of the logo?
Thanks for the feedback. Please check #77 and #79 with same color of Leo&Sassy from34. #80 with dark brown lettering of the tagline, #78 with light grey background and #81 with light beige background. Hope my revisions are correct, but if i missed something, please just let me know. God bless!
Hello Jerry. I'm preferring the color scheme of the rendering of Leo & Sassy in #34. OUR PASSION. (should have a period after passion.) I'd like to try the background color of light grey to be more of a taupe or light beige color. And the lettering for dark brown. The red outline and yellow behind the pets is a good color.
Please check #48#50 and #51. Also new font option and little adjustments #53 and #54. Hope you like it and if yo can suggest a font would be great. Sorry to ask but, about the Noah's ark joint, can you please tell me more about it? Thanks and God bless!
Hi Jerry! Could we try this same design with a different color scheme (muted red, pale yellow, gray, black...)? We've attached a few photos of the interior of the building for reference. And, we'd like to see a more vintage, classic font.
Lastly, is there somewhere to add in small print, A Noah's Ark Joint?
So sorry for the rework!
Thanks a lot for the very nice feedback. As designer, it's really a great feeling to read a such great comment like this from a contest holder/client. Please check #32 , #33 and #34 with font option of the slogan. Please feel free to ask if you want changes. God bless!
Hi Jerry, Dawn here... You're brilliant! I am amazed and impressed with how quickly you came up with this fabulous rendering. Believe it or not, you have really captured the spirit of these two pets and the perspective is perfect. I know I can have the logos adapted for various uses, but I'm thinking the slogan font will be tough to read when used on a smaller format like a mug or bag. Maybe something a bit "cleaner" / simpler for the slogan- Your pets. Our passion. ?
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Lastly, is there somewhere to add in small print, A Noah's Ark Joint?
So sorry for the rework!
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