#1 ... Thank you for being the first to submit a logo design...
--different colors for the words...e.g. 'lemon' - bright yellow...'poppy' - orangish red...'lane' magenta/bright pink
--the lamp-post...we would like to see it at the end of the name...and not surrounded by a box...also more of (if not all of) the post and possibly with attached road signs that say 'lemon' & 'poppy' pointing in opposite directions...we do not want it to be too 'cartooney'...more realistic, timeless, and traditional
--it is hard to read the slogan...maybe a different color font or some graphical elements that will help it stand out a bit more?
--Black background...we realize it may be hard to see the lampost...we are open to seeing the logo on different color backgrounds
We look forward to seeing more of your designs...Thx