Love this design, especially the buildings in the background. The lamp post seems a little big, almost don't realize its supposed to be the "l" in lemon. Maybe try to make it a little bit smaller like in #'s 8 and 9.
Also, would like to see the tag line at the bottom of the lane, like in #12
Because the lamp post is smaller, should probably shrink the size of the girl. In #13 the girl and the lamppost are approx. the same size...should we also lower the size of the buildings?
One variation we would like to see...could you make the buildings smaller as you get closer to the lamppost...creating a distance perspective...
Also, another variation we would like to see...is to remove the road beneath the name 'lemonpoppylane' and make the slogan straight like in #13
Your logos are fabulous! With just a few minor changes/variations, it'll be perfect.
#16 Would like to see what it would look like with the girl holding some shopping bags. Maybe switch the umbrella to her right hand, have her holding bags in the left?
#13 Would like to see the buildings from #25
We enjoy collaborating with you. Thanks for listening to all our suggestions and making the changes.
#38 The girls hair needs to be changed to go over her left shoulder. If you look at #13, there is a small space in-between the umbrella handle and the girls head, and the hair is over the opposite shoulder.