#5
Like the concept, thank you for your entry.
Love the blue hue. Not so keen on the streak of yellow light. Maybe remove and fill in with the blue.
Would like to see variations of color in the name (e.g. 'lemon' - bright yellow...'poppy' - orangish red...'lane' magenta/bright pink)
The slogan is kind of hard to read.....maybe a little larger?
We look forward to seeing more of your designs. Thank you!