Lee Ann KramerLogo Design Contest

Thankyou sir for kindness you have given and this my new revision sir :).

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can the the interior design be much smaller, as a tag line. take away the background. softer, less thick on the name.

Thankyou sir for kindness you have given and this my new revision sir :), Is my revision correct?

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take away the outside lines. I like the script, but not as heavy. Interior Design under the name, and thicker blockier letters.